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well i like poetry, love writing it ,though i am a complete novice, i must admit.
heres a lil poem.
was writen at a point where i was struggling with a decision of whether to go ahead with my love for my boyfriend and throw caution to the wind,and hurt my parents, or make a sacrifice for my parents, when they didnt even know i was going through all these things.
That day, that time
It was my dad, sweaty and tanned
who slaved and got me pineapple canned
It was that dad, I made him rue
That day, that time I ran away with you
It was my mom, caring and true
who showered me with love, as if on cue
It was that mom and i made her rue
That day, that time I ran away with you
It was my sis-sweet and fair
at night, who'd been my teddy bear
it was that girl, I made her rue
that day,that time i ran away with you
It is my family- they make me feel
That I've given up my heart-that feeling real
It is them all, yes, they make me rue
That day, that time I ran away with you
And though I'm happy, there's joy, there's fun
Yet loads of memories heap like a ton
I've got to leave, please do not mind
Coz I've left a family dear, behind
mm.anyone can post onto this, tell coments suggestions, what lines move u etc:
people who also post poems, if u could tell us what u thought as u were writing the poem and what u wantd to convey, it would be awesome!!
hope there are more poetry lovers around!!
mm.the decision i made about my boyfriend is conveyed in the poem., and in my signature perhaps!! :Hehe:
Thanks so much for sharing that miss.terious, that is lovely
So glad you were able to find to to a decision you were happy with regarding your boyfriend
I'd rather fall in chocolate, too, at the moment. Sometimes love sucks (and that's as poetic as I get).
I am very impressed when people are able to creatively express themselves through language (poetry or other writing), it is a skill that I wish I had.
I like your poem. Keep writing.
Well done!! I really enjoyed reading your poem
Feel free to share an others with us
since u asked for it.
this was just writen at a period i was pressurised to conform to a lot of things that went against my principles.
we think that the norms that are different are established and true and you can't do anything but yield to it, but you dont have to.
not if you think its wrong.
so cheers and a whooping hurray to those people who try and stick on to that last thread to truth despite falsifications and manipulations.
Dare To Be A Trend Setter
Clearly established are the laws of science
E=MC ain't gonna change with the times
Don't argue with it or question it's credibility
Don't even try it'll just be a liability.
No one questions nature's own laws
Or dares to try and question its flaws
Coz they're time tested and are not merely
Like other assumptions, just a theory.
The law of gravity, a well-known thing
Has attached to it, a familiar ring
What goes up will indeed come down
Be it the renowned apple, a book or even a crown
But why do I not learn from the little bird
Who soars above to places unheard?
Defies the law of gravity remains air bound
Sites unknown it makes its round
Do I look around at well-established norms
To dictate to me the right and wrong?
Or above every self-inflicted rule, do I rise
To be successful, someone cool?
-
even a little flower defies the law of gravity and grows upwards.
a flame remains facin upwards even when u tilt the candle in any other direction.
dont let anyone bring u down.
WEAR OUT- DONT RUST.
Great poetry.keep it coming.I am a new member to all for women and pretty new to using the net too.This seems like a friendlysite,I hope I can make a lot of friends here
Hi Lonewolf, Welcome
Wow that is really good I liked the first one really good, its great the way you can do that with ur emotions.
Oh and welcome Lonewolf6
heres a lil poem.
was writen at a point where i was struggling with a decision of whether to go ahead with my love for my boyfriend and throw caution to the wind,and hurt my parents, or make a sacrifice for my parents, when they didnt even know i was going through all these things.
That day, that time
It was my dad, sweaty and tanned
who slaved and got me pineapple canned
It was that dad, I made him rue
That day, that time I ran away with you
It was my mom, caring and true
who showered me with love, as if on cue
It was that mom and i made her rue
That day, that time I ran away with you
It was my sis-sweet and fair
at night, who'd been my teddy bear
it was that girl, I made her rue
that day,that time i ran away with you
It is my family- they make me feel
That I've given up my heart-that feeling real
It is them all, yes, they make me rue
That day, that time I ran away with you
And though I'm happy, there's joy, there's fun
Yet loads of memories heap like a ton
I've got to leave, please do not mind
Coz I've left a family dear, behind
mm.anyone can post onto this, tell coments suggestions, what lines move u etc:
people who also post poems, if u could tell us what u thought as u were writing the poem and what u wantd to convey, it would be awesome!!
hope there are more poetry lovers around!!
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mm.the decision i made about my boyfriend is conveyed in the poem., and in my signature perhaps!! :Hehe:
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Thanks so much for sharing that miss.terious, that is lovely
So glad you were able to find to to a decision you were happy with regarding your boyfriend
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I'd rather fall in chocolate, too, at the moment. Sometimes love sucks (and that's as poetic as I get).
I am very impressed when people are able to creatively express themselves through language (poetry or other writing), it is a skill that I wish I had.
I like your poem. Keep writing.
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Well done!! I really enjoyed reading your poem
Feel free to share an others with us
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since u asked for it.
this was just writen at a period i was pressurised to conform to a lot of things that went against my principles.
we think that the norms that are different are established and true and you can't do anything but yield to it, but you dont have to.
not if you think its wrong.
so cheers and a whooping hurray to those people who try and stick on to that last thread to truth despite falsifications and manipulations.
Dare To Be A Trend Setter
Clearly established are the laws of science
E=MC ain't gonna change with the times
Don't argue with it or question it's credibility
Don't even try it'll just be a liability.
No one questions nature's own laws
Or dares to try and question its flaws
Coz they're time tested and are not merely
Like other assumptions, just a theory.
The law of gravity, a well-known thing
Has attached to it, a familiar ring
What goes up will indeed come down
Be it the renowned apple, a book or even a crown
But why do I not learn from the little bird
Who soars above to places unheard?
Defies the law of gravity remains air bound
Sites unknown it makes its round
Do I look around at well-established norms
To dictate to me the right and wrong?
Or above every self-inflicted rule, do I rise
To be successful, someone cool?
-
even a little flower defies the law of gravity and grows upwards.
a flame remains facin upwards even when u tilt the candle in any other direction.
dont let anyone bring u down.
WEAR OUT- DONT RUST.
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Great poetry.keep it coming.I am a new member to all for women and pretty new to using the net too.This seems like a friendlysite,I hope I can make a lot of friends here
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Hi Lonewolf, Welcome
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Wow that is really good I liked the first one really good, its great the way you can do that with ur emotions.
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Oh and welcome Lonewolf6